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Yondaime
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| Character Information:Name: ??? Alias: Hajime Gender: Male Age: 21 Weight: 70kg Height: 180cm Clan: n/a Biography: n/a Looks: He is about 170cm and shows is muscles all worked out. He has his headband on his forehead. He has long spiked black hair, and his eyes are green. Hajime wears a variation of the traditional Sound garb. Hajime wears black pants and a large rope belt. What appears to be a sword is hung from the back of this belt. He wears a loose long sleeved shirt which hangs open across his chest. Underneath this shirt he wears a close fitting black cloth on his arms. The top back of his outer shirt also bears a small clan image. He also wears a pair of open-fingered gloves. Personality: Hajime is a person extremely calm who only speaks when he wants. He is a man dedicated to peace, although sometimes to achieve it, people need to fight for it. That’s the kind of person Hajime is, a person who fights for his own purposes and the purposes of mankind. He is a very gentle man who respects other even if they are lower rank. The respect he has is shown also when fighting his opponents, he doesn’t take his opponents lightly and considers them a threat no matter how small they are. When someone gets in is nerves he is so violent that he could kill without any problem, and sometimes he can become berserk...He doesn't like bossy people neither to work as a team. He doesn't opens to any person because he saw things that damage him. Rank Information:Rank: S-Rank missing nin Village: Rain village Skill Information:Skill Specialty: Ninjutsu, medic, Kenjutsu Elemental Affinity: Fire, Water, Lightning Special Characteristics: Can use snakes in battle, has a lot of chakra and he is excellent at chakra manipulation. He can do jutsus with one hand. He is really fast and his agility is unbelievable. He can sense Chakra at great distances and his vision is excellent, he can see further than a normal shinobi. Weapon of Choice: https://narutod.forumotion.com/approved-weapons-f72/mask-sword-t40.htm?sid=a8067f544336a6b6395ebc413d9bda2c
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| Jutsu- Spoiler:
Name: Goshokuzame - Five Sharks Eating
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Goshokuzame is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Water Element. Kisame will form the needed hand seals and then place his hand to the surface of the water. A shark of condensed water will emerge from each of his fingers to attack his opponent who is in the water below.
Name: Gousuiwan no Jutsu - Strong Water Arm Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Gousuiwan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. Using his ability to transform his body into water, Suigetsu will reform his arm in a more muscular form. This stronger arm allows him to deliver more powerful swings with his head cleaver sword.
Name: Daibakufu no Jutsu - Grand Waterfall Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Daibakufu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a column of water will circle the ninja and then a large force of water will erupt to hit the attacker. Due to the force of the water the target will be fully enveloped by the water and at its mercy as is pulls them away.
Name: Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Daibakuryuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below.
Name: Kirigakure no Jutsu - Hidden Mist Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Kirigakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Hidden Mist ninja. The ninja causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target.
Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.
Name: Mizu Kamikiri - Rising Water Cutter
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Mizu Kamikiri is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. To utilize this technique, Shizuku will first be under the influence of Yomi's evil medically enhanced chakra. This will grant him Water chakra. He will then slam his foot to the ground, causing water to rise up and travel towards his target as a slicing jet.
Name: Mizu no Tatsumaki - Tornado of Water
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Mizu no Tatsumaki is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the ninja. The water acts both as a barrier and attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock an opponent unconscious.
Name: Suigadan - Water Fang Projectile
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Suigadan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals to cause a nearby body of water to form a spinning drill.
Name: Suijinheki - Water Encampment Wall
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Suijinheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will first do a string of hand seals and then proceed to blow out a jet of water from their mouth to act as a water barrier from incoming attack.
Name: Suikoudan no Jutsu - Water Shark Projectile Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Suikoudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals which then causes a column of water to rise from the water and then strike their target.
Name: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.
Name: Suiryuuben - Water Dragon Whip
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Suiryuuben is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. To utilize this technique, Shizuku will first be under the influence of Yomi's evil medically enhanced chakra. This will grant him Water chakra, which he will use to generate a whirling sphere of water. This sphere can then emit whips of water, which can seek out and impale his target.
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Senei Jashu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Senei Jashu is a Ninjutsu technique that manifests a snake which extends from the mouth or multiple snakes from the sleeve. The ninja can extend these snakes to attack a target. Once extended the snake can bite into the target to hold and bind them.
Jagei Jubaku
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Using the users snake abilities, the user can extend large snakes from their sleeves, which will coil around their target and bind the target. The users' murderous intent can increase the strength of the snakes hold on the target. Only one ninja has to learn this for it to go in effect, and can be performed together or singular.
Senei Ta Jashu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Senei Ta Jashu is a Ninjutsu that requires no hand seals, that manifests a torrent of snakes which erupts from the sleeve. The ninja can extend these snakes to attack a target. Once extended the snakes can wrap around and bite into the target to hold and bind them.
Mandara no Jin - Myriad Snake Net Formation
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Mandara no Jin is a Ninjusu technique utilized by the Sannin Orochimaru. Using his ties to snakes, Orochimaru will release a torrent of serpents from his mouth. This wave will rise and rush towards his target. These snakes can also open their mouths to extend Kusanagi blades. A powerful enough chakra wave can stop the network and destroy the snakes.
Souja Sousai no Jutsu - Twin Snake Double Assassination Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Souja Sousai no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which had been forbidden because of its dark nature. The technique involves the user forming a special hand seal with their target, this allows them to then kill themself and their target at the same time. This technique is usually used as a last resort, when the ninja absolutely needs to kill their target at all costs.
--Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
--Rank: E
--Element: N/A
--Type: Ninjutsu
--Description:Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
--Name: Kai - Release
--Rank: D
--Element: N/A
--Type: Ninjutsu
--Description:Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
--Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
--Rank: D
--Element: N/A
--Type: Ninjutsu
--Description:Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
Bunhiro Bakuha - Shadow Clone Explosion
Rank: A
Type: Attack
BunHiro Bakuha is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Uchiha Itachi. At first glance the clone appears to be a normal Kage BunHiro, but Itachi can detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion.
Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique
Rank: C
Type: Attack, Defense, Supplementary
A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals, objects and the dead to fight on their behalf. The ninja normally signs a blood contract with the animal species, which allows him to summon different size and skill levels of creature
Tajuu Kage BunHiro no Jutsu - Multiple Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Tajuu Kage BunHiro no Jutsu is an advanced variation of the Kage BunHiro Ninjutsu technique which was banned by the First Hokage. This has not stopped many Jounin-level ninja from learning the technique however. Instead of creating several clones, several hundred clones are created. Like normal Kage BunHiro a ninja's chakra is split evenly among the clones when created.
The clones themselves can utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clones finally disperse, any new knowledge they have gained is passed back to the original ninja and to any additional clones. This makes Tajuu Kage BunHiro an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage BunHiros for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. With the great number of clones in Tajuu Kage BunHiro, the ninja can effectively learn in a few weeks with a hundred clones what would take one ninja numerous years.
Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.
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--Name: Chidori Eisou - Thousand Birds Sharp Spear
--Rank: A
--Element: Lightning
--Type: Ninjutsu
--Description:The user is able to shape the Lightning Element to form an extending blade of lightning. Though unstated, this blade probably takes on Chidori's characteristics, including it's ability to cut through anything which stands in its path, allowing the sword to strike its target with ease. This attack may also be similar to Chidori Nagashi, causing the target to go numb from the electrical charge.
--Name: Chidori Nagashi - Thousand Birds Current
--Rank: A
--Element: Lightning
--Type: Ninjutsu
--Description:Instead of merely focusing the electrical force to his body, Sasuke is able to extend it outside of his body and through objects which he is holding. This allows him to create a protective zone around his person. This zone of electricity can shock and immobilize his foes, presumably by attacking their nervous system.
--Name: Chidori Senbon - Thousand Birds Needles
--Rank: A
--Element: Lightning
--Type: Ninjutsu
--Description:The user is able to shape the Lightning Element to form senbon. These needles probably takes on Chidori's characteristics, including it's ability to cut through most anything which stands in its path.
--Name: Lightning Wolf Technique
--Rank: B
--Element: Lightning
--Type: Ninjutsu
--Description:This Ninjutsu technique utilizes the Lightning Element. After creating Raiton in his/her hand, the user will send out a wolf made of lightning to attack his target. Lightning will run from the user's hand to the wolf itself, limiting its range.
--Name: Raikiri - Lightning Edge
--Rank: S
--Element: Lightning
--Type: Ninjutsu
--Description:Raikiri is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. Raikiri allows the user to cut through any foe. It was given the nickname Raikiri after it was said the technique was used to cut a lightning bolt in two. Raikiri is used for assassination purposes. Activating the body to focus chakra to the hand, Kakashi and Sasuke's hand become enveloped by an electrical force. This force is their chakra altered in nature to an electrical current. By altering the shape of the force, similar to an electrical discharge, they can decide the power and range of the attack.
After concentrating all the chakra into the arm,the user uses their quickness and the power of the thrust from the chakra to pierce any object with the extended forearm. Due to the high speed, the force emits a sound like a thousand birds chirping which gave the technique its name. Because of the great amount of chakra needed to utilize the technique, the technique can only be used so many times during the day.
--Name: Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Lightning Element Shadow Clone Technique
--Rank: A
--Element: Lightning
--Type: Ninjutsu
--Description:Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes lightning to create a Kage Bunshin clone. Because it is a Kage Bunshin, the Raiton version shares the ability to interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. If the Raiton Kage Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert into its natural lightning state. Like in other Lightning Element attacks, should the target come into contact with the electricity, they will be momentarily stunned.
--Name: Kusanagi no Tsurugi • Chidorigatana - Thousand Birds Katana
--Rank: B
--Element: Lightning
--Type: N/A
--Description: Using his/her sword, the user will create Lightning chakra which he/she will transmit into the sword. The metal will amplify the lightning current, making the blade almost unstoppable. This causes the sword to take on Chidori's natural ability to cut through almost anything. Should the sword strike a human, the charge will cause the target to go numb, lessening their ability to further counter the attacks.
Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu - Chakra Absorption Technique
Rank: C
Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu is a special Ninjutsu techinque used by the Leaf ninja Yoroi. After activitating the technique, Yoroi's hand will glow with chakra. When he touches his palm on his opponents body, he can withdraw the physical and spiritual energy out of them. By reducing their chakra, it greatly increases his advantage over his opponent.
Chakra no Mesu - Chakra Scalpel
Rank: B
Chakra no Mesu is a special Ninjutsu technique used by medical ninjas. After forming the needed handseals, the ninja will focus chakra to their hands. When their charged hands reach the body of their target, they can extend the chakra internally into the targets body to cut and neatly slice their muscles and blood vessels without harming the surface skin. This technique can be used in battle, but because of its hectic nature, the fine precision required for an instant kill is not feasible. Damage can still be done to the vital organs, but the technique should be used carefully in battle.
Chikatsu Saisei no Jutsu - Healing Resuscitation Regeneration
Rank: A
Chikatsu Saisei is an advanced medical Ninjutsu technique. The technique allows the medical ninja to use the hair of the one injured as a medium to reconstruct damaged body tissue. The extent of the damage will control how difficult and long the procedure is. The injured person will be placed in the center of a square marked with rites for the procedure. One medical ninja will sit at each corner to provide precise chakra control to help in the cell conversion process. Another medical ninja will sit at the lead to guide the process.
Dai Endan - Great Fireball
Rank: B
Dai Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire element. Jiraiya will first gather the fire into his mouth and then spew a giant breath of fire constantly at his opponent.
Endan - Fireball
Rank: C
Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. This jutsu allows Jiraiya to emit a jet of fire from his mouth. While not stated, this is probably the same or a similar jutsu to the one Jiraiya uses in conjunction with Gamebunta to do Gamayu Endan.
Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Katon • Ryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target.
Saikan Chuushutsu no Jutsu - Fine Affliction Extraction
Rank: B
Saikan Chuushutsu no Jutsu is a skill used by medical ninja to remove harmful poisons from a patient's body. The ninja will infuse their chakra into liquid, which they will insert into the patient. They will then use the liquid as a medium to draw out the poison from the cells. This mix can then be removed from the body. Depending on the deadliness of the poison, further treatment with an antidote or medicine may be required.
Sanjuu Rashoumon - Triple Rashoumon
Rank: A
Sanjuu Rashoumon is a Ninjutsu summoning technique utilized by Orochimaru. One Rashoumon gate alone was said to be his ultimate defense, with this variation he can summon three of the gates in succession to help block a great incoming blast. Because the gate requires two summoning calls (a right and left), he will bite both his right and left thumbs to initiate the contract.
Gentoushin no Jutsu - Lit Apparition Technique
Rank: - B
Gentoushin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique created by Pain and used by Akatsuki to gather at one location, even while members are in different parts of the world. By forming the needed handseal, an astral form of their being will appear at the desired location. This spirit can act in conjunction with other members to do combination jutsu like the Genryuu Kyuu Fuujin. While in the spirit form, the member’s voice will sound deep and distorted.
Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.
Gouryuuka no Jutsu - Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.
Haisekishou - Burning Ash Accumulation
Rank: B
Katon • Haisekishou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed handseals, Asuma will expel an ash from his mouth. This large cloud begin to envelope his foe and when Asuma clicks his teeth, the cloud will ignite in an explosion.
Hibashiri - Running Fire
Rank: C
Katon Ninpou • Hibashiri is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. To utilize this technique, Gitai will first be under the influence of Yomi's evil medically enhanced chakra. This will grant him Fire chakra, which he will use to generate jets of fire which will race towards his target and surround them. This fire can be made more powerful with the introduction of wind from a wind element attack.
Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Rank: C
Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.
Shikon no Jutsu - Dead Soul Technique
Rank: B
Shikon no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that uses a dead body to create the illusion of another living person. The ninja can either animate a normal dead person, or alter the appearance of the dead person to resemble another. To do the second version, the ninja first changes the appearance of the dead body to resemble the person to be portrayed. Then using this jutsu they make the heart beat again, allowing them to control the actions of the dead body.
Shousen Jutsu - Mystical Hand Technique
Rank: A
Shousen Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by medical ninja. This technique allows the ninja to heal wounds by focusing their own chakra to their hands. If the ninja is highly skilled, they are able to heal more critical injuries. Highly skilled medical-Nins such as Tsunade can use their techniques to perform surgeries that otherwise would not be possible.
Shoushagan no Jutsu - Vanishing Facial Copy Technique
Rank: B
Shoushagan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique used for spying. A dark technique, the jutsu involves the removal of the face of the person to be impersonated. By wearing their face and clothing, the ninja can impersonate the original without others being aware.
Inyu Shometsu - Secret Healing Injury Destruction
Rank: A
Inyu Shometsu is a Ninjutsu technique used by Kabuto. Focusing his chakra to an area to be hit, he can begin the cell creation process the moment the area becomes injured. This ability to activate his cells and create new ones is the very reason why Orochimaru favored Kabuto's talents.
Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: A
Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that uses Kage Bunshin to create multiple physical clone copies from one thrown shuriken.
Karyuudan - Fire Dragon Projectile
Rank: - B
Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and create mud projectiles using the Doryuudan technique. The ninja will then blow a large flame to ignite the mud projectiles.
Karyuu Endan - Fire Dragon Flame Projectile
Rank: B
Katon • Karyuu Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and the proceeds to blow a large jet of fire from their mouth.
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| | | | Kyoudai Hozuki
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| | Subject: Re: Yondaime Char... Fri Feb 20, 2009 2:43 pm | |
| Approved and do you think you could get me more members | |
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| | Subject: Re: Yondaime Char... Fri Feb 20, 2009 2:51 pm | |
| Background Information/RP Sample:
History: No one knows where Hajime was born neither what is his true name or age. The only ones that had the opportunity to see him where killed or they disappeared from the map. In the bingo book he appears without a picture and with no info only with the name “Hajime”. The villages think that he was born in rain village but they don’t have 100% sure.
The true story is that he born in the rain village, but then he escaped the village after he burnt the registers of him, making no one to know because he was a child and he didn’t talked to people. He went to an org and since child he lives and talks with criminals and sometimes ex-akatsuki members, who teach him everything they know, that’s why he got so many jutsus and knowledge. He was a peaceful kid, he only wanted to learn more jutsus and become stronger, but one day a rival organization attacked killing them all but as they got near Hajime they didn’t kill him because he was still a child and he wouldn’t do nothing or reporting to the villages, since he was a criminal. After that moment he train hardly and started to kill the members of that org, he started to steal things and even do assassinations missions, becoming a dangerous criminal time after time.
After he killed the whole organization he vanished in a rain night, and no one has seen him again since then.
Rp Sample: RP Sample: When Tsuchi arrived Hajime noticed that Tsuchi was a bit worried but he was ready to start, so Hajime started to prepare himself while waiting for Tsuchi’s attack. Suddenly Hajime heard "Yea, well let’s get started, I’ll give you the first move." so he focused on the oncoming attack so that he could figure a opening. Hajime waited for an attack but Tsuchi continued stared at him. “If you are not coming I will!” Hajime sprinted in direction of Tsuchi and as he was reaching he jumped and did a “Konoha Sempuu”. When Hajime hit him his leg passed through him, and Hajime realized that he wasn’t there, so he started to look for him…”Where is he? Hum…It seems that he is the ideal guy to fight…Let´s see what he is made of.” Hajime took his hat and put it on a tree branch near the river, and then he closed his eyes trying to hear any move from Tsuchi.
As Hajime finished talking he saw that Tsuchi went to his pocket and threw something that was so small that Hajime could describe it very well. He was only seeing the light reflecting in a small metal projectile that was coming towards him. Then Hajime thought that might be a senbons so he tried to dash it but he didn’t have time to do it, so he made some seals and use his technique: Kawarimi no Jutsu. So when the senbon hit it that Hajime transform into a log. “As I was expecting It, it was a senbon…”
Now Hajime was hidden but he knew that Tsuchi could sense him so he wouldn´t stay there much time. Hajime went to his pocket and grabbed on one of his hands a kunai with a explosive tag and in the other he took a flasher, then he threw first the flasher to the ground and then he threw the kunai with the explosive to Tsuchi, while he closed his eyes to not get flashed.
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| | Subject: Re: Yondaime Char... Fri Feb 20, 2009 3:54 pm | |
| [u]Unapproved[u]
Read the rules, can't have that many jutsus.
Need a name, need a clan, need a village, and Yondaime is the name of the Fourth. why would your nickname be the fourth? need to make some additions.
also you need a much longer history if your going to be an S-rank ninja. I want to know everything about your character and you putting no one knows anything about The Fourth, makes you sound lazy.
~Shade
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| | | | Yondaime
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| | Subject: Re: Yondaime Char... Sat Feb 21, 2009 9:49 am | |
| First i changed the nickname....Second i am making a criminal that no one knows the name so i dont put his name, during the rp he will appear and everyone will know who he is...
I dont have clan since i am not sure which one i should join and secondly i would have more jutsus.
Since im a unknown criminal no one knows his story and since he is a s rank criminal he has a lot of jutsus. | |
| | | | Arvok
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| | Subject: Re: Yondaime Char... Sat Feb 21, 2009 9:57 am | |
| um Criminal's are all know its call the bingo book | |
| | | | Yondaime
Posts : 14
Join date : 2009-02-18
| | Subject: Re: Yondaime Char... Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:01 am | |
| But my char is going to be one criminal that appears in the bingo book but it was never been seen in real...In the bingo book it appears no info only "Hajime"...
The bingo book doesnt have all the criminals since all the criminals arent known... | |
| | | | Arvok
Jounin
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Join date : 2009-02-17
| | Subject: Re: Yondaime Char... Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:03 am | |
| all s-ranked Crims are...once you become a crim you village puts out your data | |
| | | | Yondaime
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Join date : 2009-02-18
| | Subject: Re: Yondaime Char... Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:04 am | |
| REad the story!!! I put there that the files were burnt when i left village. | |
| | | | Arvok
Jounin
Posts : 14
Join date : 2009-02-17
| | Subject: Re: Yondaime Char... Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:09 am | |
| i see that...ok then even though you and S rank cut down on you jutsu | |
| | | | Yondaime
Posts : 14
Join date : 2009-02-18
| | Subject: Re: Yondaime Char... Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:15 am | |
| edited...They are kinda separated so we can understand which element do i use. | |
| | | | Arvok
Jounin
Posts : 14
Join date : 2009-02-17
| | Subject: Re: Yondaime Char... Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:18 am | |
| Still to many i think...well i'll approve you but if an admin says no then i can't do anything about it
APPROVED | |
| | | | Shade
Mizukage/Admin
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Location : With your girlfriend
| | Subject: Re: Yondaime Char... Sat Feb 21, 2009 1:07 pm | |
| Arvok you are not staff so you can't approve profiles.
Again. needs a name. I don't care if nobody knows the name IC you still need a name for your character. Now your just being lazy. Need a name, need at least a good size history, in arcs, on how you became who you are. You clan is your family. doesn't necessarily mean you need to have a bloodline but you have to have a clan.
Also we are not accepting anymore S-Ranked nukenin. Go for either A-ranked or S-ranked or apply for a different position
Make these changes and you will be accepted. | |
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